The Dawn
Ecstatic bird songs pound
the hollow vastness of the sky
with metallic clinkings--
beating color up into it
at a far edge,--beating it, beating it
with rising, triumphant ardor,--
stirring it into warmth,
quickening in it a spreading change,--
bursting wildly against it as
dividing the horizon, a heavy sun
lifts himself--is lifted--
bit by bit above the edge
of things,--runs free at last
out into the open--!lumbering
glorified in full release upward--
songs cease.
William Carlos Williams
Ecstatic bird songs pound
the hollow vastness of the sky
with metallic clinkings--
beating color up into it
at a far edge,--beating it, beating it
with rising, triumphant ardor,--
stirring it into warmth,
quickening in it a spreading change,--
bursting wildly against it as
dividing the horizon, a heavy sun
lifts himself--is lifted--
bit by bit above the edge
of things,--runs free at last
out into the open--!lumbering
glorified in full release upward--
songs cease.
William Carlos Williams
Perfect!!!! Love it :-))))
ReplyDeletebeautiful unique image! and goes so well with the poem, really like it
ReplyDeleteThank you, Jonie and Yolo! :)
ReplyDeleteThe contrasting colorless/colorful really brings out the poem. Excellent!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Mike!! :)
ReplyDeleteBeautifully done! I love the image and the symbolism both!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Montucky! :)
ReplyDeleteFantastic image & one of my favorite WCWs
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Ron! :)
ReplyDeleteI'm tempted to pull the photo the rest of the way off to see the color underneath. However I will just enjoy being betwitched and between and allow the author her honor of making me want to take a peek.
ReplyDeleteHahahaha!! Thank you, Preston! :)
ReplyDeleteHow beautiful! I really like the curl edged effect with B&W and color. Lovely poem to go with too. :) Ha-ha! That is funny what Preston said. LOL
ReplyDeleteYes, Preston is a trip as I'm sure you are already aware! hahahaha!!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Anna! :)