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Wednesday, June 22, 2011

Shredded Heart



for 3B!!

I've never created an animation on this site so I thought I'd try it out.

The poem is by a young girl. Ahhh, the bittersweet memories of young love. 
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Shredded Heart

My poor, shredded heart
Is weak from loss
It's ripped part

I'm so sick of falling
For the wrong guy
I always end up bawling

I guess you dont' love me back
What? Couldn't you tell?
It's painted clear in black.

So, my torn up heart,
May just give up,
It's sick of falling apart,
After putting itself together again.

Lauren



10 comments:

  1. great animation barb, ahh the angst of love ;))

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  2. Cute poem! I like the image and the animation! That's cool!

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  3. Thank you, Montucky! Glad you liked both! :)

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  4. I had a girlfriend in High school. It was a love/hate relationship. We both loved her and hated me...

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  5. Hahahahahaa!!! Oh my! Thanks for the laugh, Mike! :)

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  6. Well done! It all goes so well together :-)))

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  7. Electrifying and animated, wow...

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