Struttin' the Peacock Rag
(Just a note. The males lose their long tail feathers in autumn
- not that it stops them struttin' the peacock rag)
Flash the blue high stepper
Doffing the green fedora
Sparkle the blades
Down the legs
And strut the peacock rag
Wink your wings to the ladies
Croon that old siren song
Hop with the rest
Show her your best
And strut the peacock rag
Spring is your casino royale
Summer is Reno and Vegas
Swooning the hens
Mooning the wrens
And strutting the peacock rag
But alas it is now coming winter
The tail is tattered and bare
Lost the last feather
Damn this weather
And strutting the peacock rag
You waggle your tail boldly
And furl your pinions up high
Sadly only stubs
No eyes, only nubs
Trying to peacock rag.
And the ladies are all a twitter
Giggling in a dither
At their silly peacock rag.
Lynn Kincade
Hahaha, wonderful. I didn't know they lost their tails in winter. Somehow I feel this should be set to music...Thanks for the giggle!
ReplyDeleteMale peacocks are stunning birds! And you brought a beautiful tribute to them with this poem B.!
ReplyDeleteThank you Jonie and Giulia!
ReplyDeleteI didn't know they shed their feathers either!
yeah, i didn't know they lost the feathers either. great post. really cute!!!!! men can be real peacocks, preening their shtuff:))
ReplyDeleteHahaha! Yep, that's how men can be alright!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Lorilynn!
What a rhythm going on here and a lovely picture also! Thank you for this........
ReplyDeleteThank you, Neva! :)
ReplyDeleteThat's a really lovely image, and I enjoyed the poem very much! Thanks!
ReplyDeleteThat's a great poem and the picture is beautiful.
ReplyDeleteThank you Montucky and Kate! :)
ReplyDeleteStrutting the Peacock Rag...now that's one I,ve never heard before (not that I'm an expert on poetry). The image is beautiful, and the poem is great!
ReplyDeleteI thought it was quite whimsical! Thank you, Mike, for visiting! :)
ReplyDeleteI posted a poem about a pure white peacock on my tumblr bluepueblo blog, it was even more stunning than some of the multi-colored ones.
ReplyDeleteKeep up the good work Barbara.
Doug
Hi Doug! I've seen the white ones and they are so gorgeous and unique looking! I'll have to look for it on your Tumbl site! :)
ReplyDeleteLovely jeweled colors!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Anna! :)
ReplyDeleteWhat a pretty peacock!
ReplyDeleteJust wanted to send you a quick congrats; I just gave you another award over at TOMW!
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Hi C. Beth!! Thank you for your comment!
ReplyDeleteWow! Another award? I'm coming to get it! Thank you! :)